the chronicles of jake mchalin(1.1)

his eyes opened slightly an he could only see a mixture of light an gray,as the seconds pass by the light becomes brighter and brighter an brighter,his vision was blurry still but he could make out a big red rectangle, he turned his head slightly to the left  ,their he could clearly make out a mirror , he made one step then another to the mirror it was a very slow walk,as he stood up  in-front of the mirror he looked at his image in the mirror ,he had black bags below his eyes an his eyeballs was as wide as the horizon,his skin was dry as the attic air.he then look over to his left an  saw a woman laying on the floor next to the toilet ,the door was half opened,he had a black 4inch heal with black leggings,black dress white shirt with a big red spot in the middle of her chest,he then turned his body an facing the woman,the walk up to the woman slowly as he got closer he saw blood coming from her chest,an she wasn’t moving ,he look at her face , her eyes were close an she looked peaceful,with her dark brown hair ,tin eye brows and small tin lips,she was clearly dead.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             Jake took two steps away from the body and look at the girl ,he  could then hear a dripping splat as he look down at his shoe he saw drops of blood on the floor,he then looked at his black shoe an as he was about to take his eye off of the floor a flicker of light caught her attention,he then moved his eye to the right,he could see a kitchen knife in his right hand,the knife had blood all over it,he then turned his head to the right an looked at him self in the mirror,as he keep looking at him self ,the color in his face began to fade,then all of a sudden the heard a loud sound,Jake!!!! pay attention,he then looked around and he was surrounded by a class room filled with 19 year olds,the class then began laughing, Jake turned red and walked up to his Spanish teacher an took out a sliver knife an stabbed his teacher in the face an stab her again and again, as Jake saw the blood he went on a blood lust his white t-shirt was now red, an a he had this smile on his face,then he heard the sound again Jake,

Jake, Jake, wake up an get ready for school, half an hour later Jake was dress and ready for school,as he looked in the mirror before heading off to school, his eyes had no emotion an filled of nothingness, an he had a big bright smile on his face

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