the chronicles of Jake mchalin

the chronicles of jake mchalin (1.3)

generallofi — Wed, 25 Nov 2009 23:19:41 +0000

he then took another step on the bus,an was so happy that Kimberly wasn’t in sight ,he then made his way to the back of the bus ,as he walk trough the bus ,all his classmate looked at him,most of the kids in Jake’s school taught he was a little weird ,because Jake never talked to any one, he usually kept to him self, there it was Jake’s usual seat at the back of the bus,he was two foot steps away from it,as took his seat he felt as ah little realive ,because the bus started its engine an was slowly heading out ,it seems like an eturnity in the mind of Jake waiting for the bus to leave but in actual fact it was only two seconds, the bus had picked up a little speed an an had driven about twenty meters then it suddenly stopped,a couple of students got up an looked out the window,one girl sitting on the opposite side of the bus said,oh!,it’s Kimberly every body,Jake had no where to run, he was wondering,how would he wiggle him self out of that one,he knew that Kimberly would tell her boyfriend an he would do something stupid,because stupid is as stupid does,he was also hoping that Kimberly would think that it was funny an forget about the whole thing, or he even had a crazy idea in his head that she might even liked it,he was about to find out what she would do because the bus driver said,morning Kimberly.as she walked up to the middle of the bus,she looked at Jake, an her eyes were burning with rage,if that look could of kill Jake would have been a dead man,she then took her seat next to her boy friend,who was the captain of the basket ball team,he was Jake’s worse nightmare an Kimberly was the girl of Jakes dreams,what had happen next Jake could of never calculate.

as the bus drove at an even 25 miles per hour,the Jake stated getting cold sweats,the area in which Jake live was a really modern residential,it was a really nice area to raise a family, they were lots of kids in the neighbor hood, an their was always something fun going on,the drive to the school was 20 minutes away and Washington community college was a realitive active college,with about 5000 students,swim team,basketball team,football,soccer,an a whole other various arts an science clubs.Jake had 5 more minutes before he reached his destination,WCC,as Jake reach down to to buckle his boot,he heard whispering, he got up,an started looking forward,Kimberly turned around an looked at him then then turned back around an whispered something in Tim her boyfriends ear,Tim ear stood up like an alert a dog,Jake could tell that, that was trouble.the bus slowed down an was making it routine stop,as the students were making their way off the bus,Jake remained,on the bus ,one minute had gone by an only Jake an Tim remained on the bus,Tim walked d up to Jake an said to him,hey freak i got something for you, Jake stood up,before he could full stand up Tim punished him in the stomach,Jake went down,Tim started calling him names,Jake got up ,time punished him in the stomach again,Jake started to get angry,Jake garbed the bus seat an pulled him self up,as he got up again Tim walk up to him an stomped on his chest then started stomping on him,after about 5 minutes of stomping ,the only thing on Jakes mind was killing,as Tim was about to walk out the bus ,Jake told him wait,Jake started to rise up from the ground,it looked like it took every bit of strength from his body,he then took on step to Tim then another then another then finally he was up in Tim faces, he then took one final step on both of Tim’s feet,then with all of his strength he pushed Tim out of the bus door while standing on his feet,as tim flew out the door of the bus ,you could hear his knees unbuckling from his feet,crack,both legs broken in an instant,Jake then took one step out of the bus.

the chronicles of jake mchalin(1.2)

generallofi — Sun, 22 Nov 2009 19:43:22 +0000

He had on a brown distress leather boots with a 2inch heal,white socks,blue acid wash jean that seems to be on earth since the beginning of time,a brown belt with animals engraved in it and a gray button up shirt,very wrinkled.He then when to the Conner of the room an picked up his bag, from which he had placed on Friday,he then reached for door handle took in a really deep breath an opened it,he walked out of the door an started to prepare him self mentally on the things which he had to for the day,as he was walking down the stair,he remembered that he had forgotten his i pod, he quickly turned around an started walking back up the stair,as he got to the top of the stair ,their was a family picture with his mother,father,two older brothers and him self at a pic-nick ,at a very young age,he kept on moving ,as he got in his room his i pod was at the top of his bed,he walk over their and reached for it, as he stood back up ,he looked out of the window, he saw into his neighbor’s window,an what he saw was every boys dream, Kimberly.

she had just came from the shower,water dripping all over her body,her long wet Bernete hair reaching her hack,smooth clear olive brown skin,tine eye brows,blue eyes,small but nose, small mouth with tin lips,she stood about 5.7 with long smooth legs.she had a towel on so Jake thought to him self,if he waited a little longer he would get a show,so the waited,Kimberly walked over to her closet and was carefully picking out what cloths she was going to wear 5 minutes had pass an Jake was getting inpatient ,all he had seen was her back,Jake! Jake!Jake! ,you are late for school,Jake taught to him self,damm,i really have to go,so he turned away from the window,as he instantly turned back to make one final looked back,his eyes looked right into Kimberly eyes,Jake had gotten pale an turned around very quickly,an walked off to the bus stop,15 minutes had gone by then the bus had finally came by,lucky their was no Kimberly in sight ,he then took one step on the bus.

the chronicles of jake mchalin(1.1)

generallofi — Sat, 21 Nov 2009 05:18:35 +0000

his eyes opened slightly an he could only see a mixture of light an gray,as the seconds pass by the light becomes brighter and brighter an brighter,his vision was blurry still but he could make out a big red rectangle, he turned his head slightly to the left ,their he could clearly make out a mirror , he made one step then another to the mirror it was a very slow walk,as he stood up in-front of the mirror he looked at his image in the mirror ,he had black bags below his eyes an his eyeballs was as wide as the horizon,his skin was dry as the attic air.he then look over to his left an saw a woman laying on the floor next to the toilet ,the door was half opened,he had a black 4inch heal with black leggings,black dress white shirt with a big red spot in the middle of her chest,he then turned his body an facing the woman,the walk up to the woman slowly as he got closer he saw blood coming from her chest,an she wasn’t moving ,he look at her face , her eyes were close an she looked peaceful,with her dark brown hair ,tin eye brows and small tin lips,she was clearly dead. Jake took two steps away from the body and look at the girl ,he could then hear a dripping splat as he look down at his shoe he saw drops of blood on the floor,he then looked at his black shoe an as he was about to take his eye off of the floor a flicker of light caught her attention,he then moved his eye to the right,he could see a kitchen knife in his right hand,the knife had blood all over it,he then turned his head to the right an looked at him self in the mirror,as he keep looking at him self ,the color in his face began to fade,then all of a sudden the heard a loud sound,Jake!!!! pay attention,he then looked around and he was surrounded by a class room filled with 19 year olds,the class then began laughing, Jake turned red and walked up to his Spanish teacher an took out a sliver knife an stabbed his teacher in the face an stab her again and again, as Jake saw the blood he went on a blood lust his white t-shirt was now red, an a he had this smile on his face,then he heard the sound again Jake,

Jake, Jake, wake up an get ready for school, half an hour later Jake was dress and ready for school,as he looked in the mirror before heading off to school, his eyes had no emotion an filled of nothingness, an he had a big bright smile on his face